Our Feedback:

What went well:

-Good eye contact with the audience.

-Good moodboard and concept of music video.

-Well thought out.

-Excellent interaction with audience and prompts to audience to remind them of the different ideas.

- Love your ideas and music video.

Even better if:

-Include all three ideas in your music video to show the variety of shots.

-A stronger introduction need for Presentation.

Now try this:

-Explain what you have learnt from the poll everywhere feedback.

-Smile when pitching